I believe what you published was actually very reasonable. However, think on this, what if you were to create a killer title? I ain't saying your content is not solid., however what if you added a title that grabbed a person's attention? I mean AYKFB - Are You K Face Book - Do you have 1000 fans or more is kinda vanilla. You could glance at Yahoo's home page and note how they create post titles to grab viewers to open the links.