I think that what you wrote was actually very logical. However, what about this? what if you were to write a awesome headline? I am not suggesting your information is not good, however what if you added something that makes people desire more? I mean AYKFB - Are You K Face Book - Do you have 1000 fans or more is kinda boring. You might peek at Yahoo's home page and see how they create post titles to get viewers to open the links.